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Sky, My Kingdom

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I am the hellion of the skies.
Soaring through the invisible sea flooded by wind and drifting among the airy white clouds.
On these magnificent wings I effortlessly turns circles and ride the currents.
The power of surging gusts flowing through every inch of my being.
Roaming in this lonely, free world above the earth.
My hoarse screams pierce the hearts of the creatures on the ground.
I am not an animal bound to the land by the forces of gravity.
I defy this irrefutable law that commands the attraction between two bodies of mass.
The atmosphere is my domain.
This haven is my kingdom and I am its ruler.
Fear me for I am forever on the prowl, that is until I find my prey.
Gaze upwards and see me there, as I fly.
I am a hawk, see me peer downward at thee, gliding high up in the sky.
This is a piece of prose that just came flowing out of me and onto the paper of my notebook. I had fun writing it and I think it's pretty awesome. :pencil: :heart:

Please enjoy reading it~!! :rose:

Please DON'T STEAL MY WORDS!!! :shakefist:

Sincerely, DreamsWithinMe -- Aisling :frail:
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dragonstar-msg's avatar
The imagery of your words is quite exquisite. However, being the poetic mind that I am, I feel the flow of such description is a bit off. Just as a suggestion you could move the sentence beginning with "My hoarse screams" down a couple lines to just before "Fear me" and produce a more coherent flow of logic. This is only a suggestion and one not necessarily needed to get your desired outcome. ^^